Wow. Your two characters' descriptions were superb. I really enjoyed reading that! The only thing is... so the antagonist isn't really a 'bad guy?' I didn't really understand why he's described possessing such favorable traits! It sort of goes against the grain (but that's what makes a story unique, right?). Otherwise, a job VERY well done! If you would be so kind as to email me your finished draft, I would be much obliged to you. I'd love to read it. :)
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